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A discarded life, thrown away like an old, dusty teddy-bear
Found deeply buried in the loft
With other ‘cherished’ childhood memories…

Yet cherished, is a word rarely used in the memory of this girl,
Distraught, hurt, ruined
Along with the little Barbie dolls she so loved…

Digging through the past, she cries, sniffs, snarls viciously
As she remembers the pain
That they put her through, the taunting…

Then they come again and restrain her as she throws herself
At the bars of her room
And they wonder why she is in prison…

Her memories return of that vicious night when hell broke loose,
She died right there,
Not in body but in soul and mind…

The blood red staining the walls, some of it hers but mostly theirs
As she fought back,
She was locked up, the key thrown away…
©2005-2009 ~Purple-Ducks
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ok, ive been sat on this for a long time, i hate the ending with a passion though:(

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:iconwarrioroflight:
Extremely powerful. I really like your wording in this poem.

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Elizabeth A. Berndt
259 S. Illinois St.
Martinsville, IN 46151-1808
(765) - 342 – 4387
765 - 318-0277 (cell phone)
eberndt98@hotmail.com
:iconmightymartynus:
i still love it. faved:)

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"You fool, you wanderer, you challenged the gods and lost!" - Nightwish, Planet Hell
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Avatar created by the awesome ~Dragon-Delta!
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In difficult ground, press on; in encircled ground, devise strategems; in death ground, fight - Sun T
:iconpurple-ducks:
thank you very much:hug:
:iconpurple-ducks:
thank you:hug:s i still hate the ending
:iconpurple-ducks:
thank you:hug:s i still hate the ending
:iconwarrioroflight:
You're more than welcome ! :hug:
You're a marvelous writer, don't ever forget that.

--
Elizabeth A. Berndt
259 S. Illinois St.
Martinsville, IN 46151-1808
(765) - 342 – 4387
765 - 318-0277 (cell phone)
eberndt98@hotmail.com
:iconmightymartynus:
:hug: i dont, i love it...but then no one ever listened to me...:smooch:

--
"You fool, you wanderer, you challenged the gods and lost!" - Nightwish, Planet Hell
------
Avatar created by the awesome ~Dragon-Delta!
--------
In difficult ground, press on; in encircled ground, devise strategems; in death ground, fight - Sun T
:iconpurple-ducks:
aww :blush: nah im not, on the other note, i have poems of yours in my inboxm, dont think ive forgotten about you hug:
:iconpurple-ducks:
lol i listen, i just doubt myself=p

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